Good job explaining, but try to move around less and go to the places being explained. OR actually perform the commands while you do. Having a script isn't a bad idea! Overall a good video, but could be slightly boring. Try to capture people's attention immediately with a strong intro or with a funny moment.
We suggest that you actually showcase the features instead of just talking about them. We will not be accepting any more applications that just run around and talk, as that does not really show anything about the server and does not help promote is, unless your channel is really big.